Compose a haiku and post it in a comment. Remember that a haiku is 3 lines long. The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5 syllables. For example:
The black felt tip pen
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Please use imagery and kigo in your haiku. We'll vote on the winner tomorrow.
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Thunderstorm awake
blocking the torn bright red sun
cloudy wisper love
Thunderstorm awake
blocking the torn bright red sun
cloudy whisper love
there a spelling error!!!
Snow is everywhere.
The floor and the walls so white,
the night sky so black.
|Two-line haiku?
|It cannot be permitted.
|Use a few of these.
|Easy translation,
|But the poem seems avant-garde.
|Refrigerator.
Rain tearing the walls.
Force is pushing against me.
Pulling sheets away.
my red shirt blazing
i can see people staring
i shine like the sun
The door bell ring rings
Get up to open the door
Unlock It, my mom
life is demanding
everyday is a new one
accept the challege
Sitting in the dark
I watch the moon and the stars
As they shine tonight
The dog chased the cat
See dog run around large tree
Dog took a long nap
Man, I hate Haiku.
It's ASKING for bad grammar.
Inglish errorz lots.
Ineptitude reigns.
Another failure to keep.
Their angst makes me laugh.
An un-dead geisha.
Creeping in the dark of night.
Dancing down the street.
Five syllables first.
Then seven must follow.
I want a sandwich.
My name is sally
And my friend's name is allie
We both like Holly
The heart beats for life
do not damage or hurt it.
Don't give it away.
Allie is a beast
so kind and humble and sweet
so full of knowledge
Dreaming of the past
By the green of nature's youth
A lover's smile, warm.
Azmera Menase
is the name of this lady
she is never slow
The leaves are falling.
The smell of rotten pumpkins.
Fall is almost here.
tiana is cool
and only a fool will drool
thats not cool
The sun rose highly,
Shinning through the clear blue sky
At dusk it falls down.
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